LOGLINE
The threat of a Great Battle looms over a solitary village on a mysterious island. 19 year old Hazzard, son of the village chief, fights to unravel the truth of their isolation and the meaning behind a foreboding letter H in the sky.
AWARDS
Coverfly Top 19% Overall
2020 - Semifinalist, Emerging Screenwriters - Genre Screenplay Competition
2020 - WeScreenplay Review: Top 12% Originality, Top 14% Structure, Top 15% Plot
WeScreenplay judges review
"First impressions are very good, presentation is professional, and the writing is cinematic and highly engaging. The descriptions are highly specific and vivid, yet concise, the perfect balance that allows us to visualize the show without bogging down the read. I also liked how we start with so much going on right from page one. It adds energy to the story and gives it a sense of purpose. The message to the audience is that you respect our time and if we go down this path it will be worthwhile. I also liked how unique and fresh it felt. This story and story world don’t reinvent the wheel, yet it all feels new and original, rather than a copy of its inspiration. Hazzard is a strong lead, I found myself caring about him early. His personality is strong due to his expression of his strong opinions and taking action. I think the structure of both scenes and acts is very good. In fact the overall structure is very strong and I love the cliffhanger ending. The ultimate question I always ask myself if would I tune in for the next episode. And it’s a resounding yes, although mostly to find out what is going on. A strong piece of writing, great work."